增加GRE作文表現(xiàn)力的方法

讓自己的新GRE作文寫的更具有渲染能力，就要靈活運(yùn)用一些語法和可能簡(jiǎn)單的但是很地道的表達(dá)方式。下面就為大家進(jìn)行GRE作文句子技巧的介紹，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)能力，考生們認(rèn)真練習(xí)GRE作文技巧，爭(zhēng)取取得理想的新GRE作文效果。

一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動(dòng)詞。

1、把句中的表語轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語。例如：

Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語)

2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。例如：

1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.

2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。例如：

1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

二、多用語意具體的動(dòng)詞，保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。例如：

1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.

三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。例如：

1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.